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Re: Passion Times Ten
This is really good I love how realistic it is and the guy takes the first lead and the girl takes the second such soft lips it sounds so romantic ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Prey to be Preyed
That is a really good poem :D it is very intense :smt063 :smt074 :smt027 I will give it a big thumb up :smt023 Now everyone needs to give it an ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Masterpeice
aww, that's cute i love the ending where it says "they come to tell you it's "a masterpiece"" That's really cute!!!!I don't have any correction you did all of it ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Kate Has 8 Lives :3rd Chapter
OMG I LOVE IT IT IS COOL IT RULES THE SCHOOL :elephant: I AM WEIRD!! :lol: Btw the way whaen you read this read it in the beat of a ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Kate Has 8 Lives.
Hola, Chica!! I love it i love the fact that she was a crinimal since 9!!! I find it really funny with the asain lady ! but it is sad ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Secrets
That was amazing :shock: Sorry my review is not long but, I don't have anything to correct :D
Jul 15, 2008